smokey in da house with bass
g is the dopest lyricist
Mmmmmmmmmmm the juice
haha SHIT you werent supposed to hear this!
My favourite from the soundtrack.
The waves you've used for each instrument is perfect!
Damn, sick flow - really suited the beat!
Didn't get some of the references, but really enjoyed the rhymes.
Also reminded me of Eminem and Lecrae at times.
Typically I don't like explaining bars because I think a verse should stand for itself, but I suppose I can explain if you're curious. The guy I'm battling took the champion title from his opponent when his son ended up in the hospital and wasn't able to compete and he refused to give an extension. He's also a poker champion and is among the most loud-mouthed people in the little rap group I battled him on. Most everything else is self-explanatory I think.
Funny that you mention Eminem, since the beat is actually an instrumental of Bitch Please.
I've loved this for a while now, everything is just so perfect!
Love it, it took me a couple of listens to get the beat you were going for.
Lyrics are great. Flow isn't the best, but you did well with the syncopated beat/alternating signatures.
Recording is a little poor, but it doesn't effect the quality too much.
Keep at it, you have talent!
P.S I hear 'timeless rhymes' instead of 'timeless verses' in the second last line
Yeah, I know my flow isn't great - I've been writing bars for several months but the amount of actual recording I've done is practically nonexistent. Thankfully I think it has more to do with lack of experience than with this particular beat.
I agree wholeheartedly with recording quality - after spitting my verse (in Audacity, lol) I probably spent about an hour dawdling with compression and EQ like a drool monkey, not really understanding what the point was of the different curves/ratios. Also I make no guarantees that the provided lyrics will be identical to the recording. :P
The chorus is so... wholesome ._.
An orchestra fits this SO well
Best song/10 ;)
L> next song to orchestrate
Make moar! :D
A well-thought and executed piece. BRAVO! 10/10, 5/5
Man, CT is awesome.
Doesn't BOF3's forest music start the same way?
Anyway keep it up.
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